only 1 advice...
when the dude was sittin' on top of the building his clothes were...what's the word? hmm...fluttering? yes, fluttering in the wind i guess. well, i noticed that his jeans were doin' that. jeans are to bulky and heavy to be fluttering in the wind like that. so that's all i didn't like. other than that it was good. nice job.
it's been said...
i dun have to say it . but that tear at the end was fuckin' hilarious! i was like...WTF!? LMAO!
not bad
i would like to see more details in ur drawings. mebbe u could touch up a bit more on the shadows of the character? there is one thing that i hate though...please do not use that font anymore! (the one in ur credits) i keep seein' that in ppl's submissions! the first time i've seen it was in valhalla knights and i thought i was pretty tacky then. and now errbody is usin' it! wtf? please its annoying and tacky. u have better taste my friend.
Haha, everyone hates that text because it's so over-used. It was a rush job, the text choosing. You won't see it again.
the fog was wack!
like the other reviewer said...make it more consistent. i liked the eerie music from the game. are u gunna base this off the game? cause so far it seems like that. if so then put a lil bit of something of ur own in there to make it a more original.
i really love the song!
yea like i said the music was off the hook! nice design on the birds too.
this is the same as your trailer!
why did you submit this? i really wanted to see what was gunna happen but it was basically the same shit i saw on ur trailer with one extra small scene. also i now noticed that u copied a picture of o-ren in the front view because with that extra scene in the end of her facing sideways i can tell that u have a different drawing style. if ur gunna copy production IG's drawing style at least be more accurate. c'mon now if u compare o-ren's eye from the front to the one u drew from the side it doesn't look like the same eye. i know u can do better so please try harder.
Emulating a style is not copying. It's meant to be the point.
And yes, the second Oren doesn't look as true to the animation, but that's because of a slight production problem...
-I'm not nearly as good an artist, and i'm drawing on a 15x15cm £20 tablet-
sorry but i'm not a big fan of locks
or any of that clock stuff either. I hate the stupid voices! >:(
Locks pwns you adn you know it!
i knew i wasn't the only one!
yup i knew i sensed a ren and stimpy-esque style in this cartoon. i actually give you props cause ren and stimpy is not showing anymore...well i last heard of it on spike tv but not much if not any new episodes are airing. so i liked it because i love ren and stimpy and your cartoon is very similar to them. but as one of the other reviewers said...you should develop this into more of your own cartoon than just a ren and stimpy "copy". sorry if that sounded harsh but i dont want people to be putting you down cause you supposedly copied ren and stimpy, you know? i want to to do well cause you did a great job. oh and good job on using moonlight sonata!
are u ready for the ultimate terror? panty waste!
hahaha that game was hilarious! limp wrist! hahaha the game cracked me up everytime that guy played it! hahahaha
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